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Saturday, November 12, 2005

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gdiaz

I would like to start by stating that your group’s thesis was very effective and is what made your post so good. It made the post go thoroughly as planned, where you went from talking about how a trial would be conducted in the 19th century to how it is conducted in the 20th century without many problems. I would only have to critic on the format of the post, because some paragraphs were not separated by a space making it somewhat tedious to read. There were also a few grammar mistakes that could have been easily corrected with a peer review such as, “haystack all say long. This backfired against himi because he made his daughters work int eh fields.” There was also no pictures or reference to the book, which could have also made this post much stronger. One last thing to note is that I didn’t see a group report either, which is necessary. Overall though, I think you guys did a great job and I’m sure your next posts will be just as good.

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